Well, it's not complete but the end is in sight, so I decided some feedback would hurry be along. I've been sitting on the beginning chapters for a while now and that's so hard to do...argh.

Shelter is lovely if you just need a little push to watch it ;)

I think I fixed the layout problem, let me know if it's still messed up when you read the next set, okay? I'll be posting those tonight or tomorrow at the latest.